Do you think this poem is any good?

Question

My words bring attempts to end my life;

Creeping on my roof... when I was alone that night.

Keeping myself calm seems to be a useless endeavor;

Ever wishing for better days and easier ways.

Only sad letters and words... it seems I'm hardly truly heard.

Jumping from painful moments into a pretend happiness.

On the bad days... it's surprising I'm alive - just getting by.

Sharing my thoughts involves harsh words painfully rejected.

Everything coming from my heart is constantly disrespected.

Paying for things I'm hardly sure why I was even saying.

Happiness is how I learned to act.

Killing myself in attempts to spread love and/or opinons.

Every step I take seems to further my pain and heartaches.

Nobody seems to really understand how I see things.

Tomorrow is an after-thought which is hard for me to take.

Answer 1

one of the best i've heard

Answer 2

Not Bad At All

Answer 3

This is a nicely written poem. It is very emotional and deep, i can tell the person is going through a lot of pain! You can feel it and vibe with the feelings of the person. It touched my heart. Keep up the great writing!

Answer 4

that was amazinggg

i loved ittt(:

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its poetry and im looking for opinions its a deep poem too so people who see this answer i would appreciate the opinionsss(:

Answer 5

I liked it a lot. Very deep.

Answer 6

I loved it, keep up the great work. I love deep poetry it has so much pain but brings a great relation to life...