Do you think this poem is finshed?

Question

well i started writing this one a while ago and each time i read it seems it needs more but i just get stuck...idk what do you think?

you tore my heart into two,

my hopes, wilted and shattered,

you said I just won't do,

to you, that's all that mattered.

didn't you give me a chance,

to prove we're made for each other,

let me show it you just once,

but in my heart, I know you'll never...

maybe I've started

writing poems too late,

because my heart's all blistered,

and so full of hate.

Answer 1

no, it's not finished.

Answer 2

Hear me out. I did not read this poem, I do not intend too. The only thing that matters is if YOU think the poem is FINISHED. If you have a question on the work itself go ahead and I will answer it.

Edit: why does no one put titles on their poetry??

Answer 3

But still waiting for the day;

when love is on it's way...

to u forever...............

hey dear may be this or so u can add...to complete it...it's sounds incomplete coz of its unfinished dialogues..n pending emotions..but a line or 2 will end it. bye

Answer 4

it doesnt sound finished. add another stanza that will wrap up your poems theme in one final dramatic statement

Answer 5

Poems, can't know they are poems. But it needs more. Filled with hate is the climax....it needs an ending, an ending that isn't gentle though. The hate is the emotional climax, your ending should be the mental acceptance of the emotion