Do you think this poem is good?

Question

I was so smart I should have been a scientist

I have crazy visions in my mind that's why I need a psychiatrist

I look in the dictionary to find a random word

Then I turn nouns and adjectives into verbs

I'm a Jesus so I'm holden Gods rifle

I know stuff that you weren't meant to find like the Lost Books out of the Bible

I'm fighten war everyday so Im a Jesus in the battle

I know what you're thinkin he must be a Christian

That just shows how much you listen and pay attention

Because a real man of God does not need a religion

All he needs is God and his family not those old traditions

You must be ignorant to think the end is near

Cause our father God would never scare you and have you in fear

You want to see God and Jesus it's simple look in the mirror

We are all Gods and powerful beyond measure

Since I found this message I feel like a pirate finding lost treasure

I'm saying the truth that's why it's so insane

This might be insane but God and the Devil really are the same

We do good and bad that's how we are the Devil and God

You're getting closer to the answer just turn the door k**b

Answer 1

No.

Meter is nonexistent.

Rhyming is atrocious.

Meter and rhyming are not required in poetry, but if it rhymes, it should have meter.

Major problem is the fact that it is choppy reading in places, and in others, reads more like a diary entry than poetry.  That and the fact that the lack of punctuation makes it one giant run-on sentence.

It's actually a pretty bad attempt at writing.

Answer 2

I'm sorry but it's boring and didn't finish reading it.

Answer 3

i think its ok.. but at the beginning piece ..it sound so arrogant... but in the end.. its ok=D

Answer 4

hmmmmmmmmm??????

Answer 5

LUV IT

Answer 6

its pretty good. i liked it!  

Answer 7

Yes.. Yh it has rhyms and way of expressing is also gooood...

Answer 8

Fantastic!