Do you think this songs are good?

Question

I wrote this song, it's one of thee worst songs i wrote so if u think this is good then that means you mite like thee others but if u don't like it then u still mite like thee other i'm confused... also if u have any advice then plz tell me, btw thee song is call Don't Change Me =]]

I'm different then everyone

Is that such a crime?

I like being one of a kind

So don't be a hater

Just cause I'm different doesn't mean I'm strange

Everyone is special in their own way

Everyone is who they are

Don't try to change me

Don't try to hide me

Don't try to make me different then who I am

I'm special in my own way

I like being me and noone else

My life is different from everyone's

So back off of me

There's nothing wrong with being different

There's nothing wrong with being an outcast

Don't judge me for who I am

Cause I love being me

Don't try to change me

Don't try to hide me

Don't try make me different then who I am

I'm special in my own way

Don't judge me cause I'll judge you back

I know I'm different

I just love being me..... love being me

So tell me wutchu think, PLEASE BE NICE WITH THE COMMENTS! whoever gives thee best advice is best answer XD

Answer 1

It's very personal and it has a lot of feeling. I personally like songs better when they kind of rhyme. It doesn't all have to be rhyming, but some parts should kinda.

Like the first part you wrote,

I'm different then everyone

Is that such a crime?

I like being one of a kind

So don't be a hater

I would change it to,

I'm different from everyone

Is that such a crime?

You're all the same

I'm one of a kind.

It's good though, especially for you only being 12! :)

Answer 2

It sounds alot like me seriously I love it

Answer 3

I like it.