Do you tink this is good? constructive criticism is good too?

Question

half asleep, and words flow through my mind. i climb out of bed and start writing. i've never been a writer so i know its probably not good.

well here it is.

Through the eyes

of an ignored soul,

she sees a world

in which she hates.

Full of anger, and mistakes,

mosters and thieves.

she wonders

what she has done to deserve this.

She believes

its a nightmare.

but she never

wakes up.

They look past her,

never making an effort

to look at what she is

and what she coould be.

she's everything

but ordinary

her mind travels

beyond the unknown.

her eyes see everyone

and everything with a purpose.

her dreams venture

to the imossible,

though she finds

that everything is possible.

Through the eyes

of an ignored soul,

she has an unknown,

amazing purose.

But no oone makes the effort

to notice.

is it good??

constructive critism??

thankss(:

Answer 1

wow that hit me hard

i really felt that :D

Well done

Answer 2

I liked it, thought it was alright. It won't win any awards, lol, but it's a nice enough poem. Maybe, if you want, you can go back over it with a fine toothed comb and make it even better. I'm not a poet so I wouldn't know what to tell you in terms of style or anything :)  

Answer 3

wow! that was amazing:] don't doubt yourself! you are a writer if you can write something that deep! i loved it and it kept me thinking! keep writing :D