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Do you want to hear the ramblings of a mad woman?

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Reasoning with the Voice of Reason

"You're supposed to be writing."

Shut up .You're not the boss of me!

"Actually I am .*sigh* You never listen to the Voice of Reason."

What if you're not the Voice of Reason?

What if you're the Voice of Unreason?

"Unreason?... I'm not being unreasonable."

"Your acting crazy."

I am not!

"Yes you are..You're aruging with yourself and losing."

I'm not losing..You're losing!

"That is correct."

Ha! So you agree I'm winning.

"No."

But you said you were losing so I must be winning.

"No we are both losing."

How so?

"Well the person reading this is winning."

What if they are losing.. would we be winning then?

"No. If the reader was losing then we would all be losing."

Who says?!

"So says the Voice of Reason."

Okay now your being unreasonable.

You are now the Voice of Unreason.

"Impossible."

There is no winning woth you is there?

"Ah so you finally understand."

Author's Note : Quotation marks= "The Voice of Reason"

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  1. That was great, just loved it --the battle within, been there and definitely done that!!!  

    Cheers!!!


  2. Am I being unreasonable by responding with a reasoned answer or would you like an unreasonable answer?  I like, great back and forth as the mind often works.  My compliments.

  3. Love it, flawless in respect to irratation, thoughful, rife with emotion and pain, my type of poetry, well done.

  4. Great entertainment - never heard it presented so eloquently ♥

  5. Amazing from beginning to end! I love it! lol.... Thanks for the laugh.

  6. A most interesting viewpoint.  Frankly, we all have these arguments and conversations (within ourselves) if we are truly sane anyway, but we all fear we'll be thought to be MAD!  But I'm so glad you've been brave and posted this! :O))))

    Seriously, this is quite entertaining to read and I like it.  Number one, it makes sense, and number two that bothers me!!!! :O))))))

  7. All poets argue with themselves. Most of the time, we lose.

  8. Ah the voice of reason...just one of the cast of thousands living between our ears and trying to argue with us at the worst times!

  9. cute

  10. Excellent dialogue poem, reminds me of stuff I used to right, all controversial and interesting with an end that wasn't really an end, and an understanding that drove one to madness. This was hysterical...reminding me of many conversations with myself, and with you, oddly enough.

  11. Ok, that was different. How bored were you when you wrote this?

  12. Love it !!!

    Am I wrong for writing ?

    Your right I am wrong

    My rite to write is wrong ?

    How wrong am I in my rite to right what is wrong ?

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