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Do youall like my pome?

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its for school, i just wrote it. tell me wat yall think, and rate it too. thaaaynkz.

After Armageddon

When kingdom comes,

like mammoths left

fuel to flow the earth,

we'll leave our shelters from the weather;

as confusions hibernate in the dust,

on tables, dimly lit screens flickering through webs,

rust, and vines--

our songs, passing through chimes,

in orchards, rain micro chips and petals.

As the nectar of technology still pulses through filaments,

for the newly emerging,

the world will come with instructions-

blueprints blowing in the afternoon breeze,

and our memory,

escaping the winds that drag our dust through steel beams.

And safety vaults will hide away in homes

like treasures,

filled with recoveries, reprieves

and un-repented love.

We called it faith-

in a language tethered to time.

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  1. it is well done. i think very highly of it. not sure if you prefer a rating scale of 5 or 10, but i suppose it would not matter either way in giving a perfect score.

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