Does This Look Good?

Question

7 Times Out Of 10 We Listen To Our Music At Night, Thus Spawned The Title Of This Program. The Word "Maraud" Means To Loot. In This Case, We Maraud For Ears.

Did I Put All Of The Periods In The Right Place And Stuff Like That?

Answer 1

Sure...Not sure what your asking  

Answer 2

If you want the first letters capitolized, it won't look good to any literate person. However if this is for your myspace friends.. That's a whole 'nother story.

Answer 3

I don't get it haha,

but I don't like how the first

letters are capitalized, kinda

hard to read and annoying.

Answer 4

You never start a sentence with a number by using the number...you should spell out the number "7" at the beginning of the first line.  Your sentences are too short and choppy.  Why on earth do you want to capitalize the first letter of each word?  It looks very, very strange and makes it harder to read.