Does anyone like this poem?

Question

Today i awake from yesterday

From a night so long and black

I really need to find a way

To leave a world thats so whack

I take a look around outside

At world so defiled and dark

And see an eagle fly with pride

So this quest i decide to embark

Now my good freind simon and me

Run though the gauntlet to the sky

Running through the hate to be free

Tumbling toward a mountain high

Simon looks down and says

"You wont hurt me no more"

Such a difficult task this is

To be with the eagles and soar

Now where on the moutain top

We ready to be free so we decide to die

And off this moutain we hop

Dangling and hanging in the sky

Answer 1

Bloody fantastic!!!!!!

Answer 2

good, but in the first stanza, instead of saying  "to leave a world thats so whack" just say "to leave a world thats wack" without the so.

Answer 3

yes....but it is scary...i hope you are not like this..personally....two thumbs up...........

Answer 4

i loved it.

Answer 5

its okay

a little to rhyme-y

it dosnt have a lot of soul to it

it needs a little work

or a goood story behind it

then it will be better

because the words will mean something

and it will be filled with emotion not empathy

i hope i helped

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