It's a stupid poem I wrote that isn't finished. I'm debating on whether I should hurl it in the direction of the nearest garbage can, or brighten it up with my fantastic writing skills. (Or lack thereof...Whatever.) Please don't copy it or I will hunt you down and hurt you. Okay not really. It's called "Back to black."
*Prologue*
"When life lacks of the plastic rainbow-shaped brightness that once filled the the emptiness,
When the only source of happiness is through out-of-focus memories,
When copious razor blade slashings cannot cure the embedded sorrows that fill every pore."
Clothed entirely in dark attire
Stepping back safely into the shadows
Sealing off the last traces of light
And that's all I got so far. Is it any good? I know poems are supposed to capture your attention, but I'm only 15, And I have no razor blade experience. Any changes, corrections or suggestions? And no I'm not "emo." God, that's so lame. Sterotype much?
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