Does my poem, A leap of love, show the love?

Question

She made a promise to her mother

To learn to dance just like no other

But she could feel it in her vision

To never make one bad decision

You see her mom had done a move so daring

And found the floor was not so sparing

And now she’s slightly paralyzed

Her dream is done unrealized

Well as time went by a new contest

Her daughter vowed to be the best

She felt her mother watching her

Praying old events will not occur

But she glided to that very move

And did the leap and found her groove

Then like Fred Astaire did with a broom

She danced the floor and swept that room

Then in her ears there came a roar

The votes were in a perfect score

And to all the others who had tried

With that leap of love they were denied

But a vision seen then was not kept

Her mom forgave her as they wept

They felt their tears, they shared their cries

Her mom had won now through her eyes

Answer 1

That's a lovely poem! :)

But the question, does it portray love? In a sense it could. But in my eyes, the poem as a whole doesn't. The last line of each stanza however, does. Good job on the poem.

Answer 2

WOW that is amazing and yes it shows the love for your mom

Answer 3

I love your style and rhyme. I never heard a poem like that. You are really good and you should do poem shows on poetry night. It was also funny.

Answer 4

i felt the loveee

Answer 5

Wow! Your poem does show a lot of love between a mom and her daughter; don't stop writing poems like this! It's fantastic!

Answer 6

aww I definitely felt the love! very nice poem! I ♥ it! it's very touching! =]

Answer 7

yeah, it is really sweet and it shows the love