Does my poem sound sort of lame or is it good enough?

Question

You Can Look But You Can't Have It

When you sit next to me,

my heart starts beating faster

and i inch closer to you

ever so slightly.

When you compliment me,

i look into your eyes

and i see that you mean

everything you say.

I want to take your hand and

tell you how much i appreciate

you being my best friend

through all these years.

Deep down inside, though,

i want us to be more than friends.

but that can't happen.

not now....

I can't whisper into your ear

and say "I love you".

I can't kiss you softly

because i have someone else

For now, i'll be happy with

you being my friend.

But never forget that

i'll always love you

Answer 1

It is not lame it's a good good poem.

Answer 2

sounds good you should publish it. =)

Answer 3

wow...really good ^^

it kinda makes me think about this girl i know.  as if it was her saying this....

it kinda puts me in a bummed state of mind reading this cause she's with some one else, and it makes me realize that much more that nothing more than being friends can happen between us....*sigh* Y.Y....oh well, id rather be a friend that not have her in my life at all ^^.

anyways, love the poem ^^

Answer 4

i think its good.

Answer 5

pretty good i liked it.

Answer 6

its not lame

i actually like this one its good