Does she sound cool?

Question

Name: Mitchie

Age: 16

Features: Long blonde hair and fair skin

Details: Mitchie is a witch who is still trying to figure

things out. She is trying to find others like her, but has had no success. At school, she is a complete loner and she wants to make friends but no one even notices her. At lunch she eats with her brother Sam, but other than that, she is alone.

Answer 1

Sounds like every other teenager out there.  Cool is an opinion by the way.