Does this capture your attention?

Question

I'm writing a book, and they say the first few lines r paragraph has to capture your attention. Does this capture yours?

There is no happy ever after, it’s only an unfinished chapter. I think I’m losing my soul. Who am I? I am yet to find out. The next few chapters of my life, as indefinite as they may seem, I think I’m starting to picture an image of how it will be. I sleep all the time. It’s not because I like it, because very often my grandparents would tell me, “The person who sleeps a lot is a sluggard, and they will never make it in life, be wise!” I listened to them but I didn’t believe them. I didn’t change my attitude, because anything was possible; but only in my dreams.

Answer 1

Is this a real book or something for a school project?

  Also, it helps to know what the book is going to be about, but I am guessing it's going to be like a bio about you.



This line right here I don't get "I didn’t change my attitude, because anything was possible; but only in my dreams."  Also, you could probably do without these lines "There is no happy ever after, it’s only an unfinished chapter."



You should probably start it out like this. “You’re probably thinking, Who am I? I often find myself asking that very same question. I've yet to come to an honest answer. Often I’m thinking I am losing my soul. As indefinite as this may seem. I'm constantly trying to picture an image of how I'll be.  Often my grandparent tell me a "person who sleeps a lot is sluggard and they never make it in life and are never wise." They say such things because often I am found doing nothing but sleeping."

And then maybe you should go from there.



Good luck hoped this help you some.