Does this give an opposing view of Judgment?

Question

Inspired by Neonman's poem, Judgment, I have written this:

Black Heart

by Elaine P

Cygnus X1, the Swan

Has a black hole in its heart;

Luminous on the surface,

The constellation is destroying itself

from within.

Do you know anyone

who is doing the same?

Answer 1

Burnt

Are the hands

That never reach out

To touch the soul of others

Lost

Thanks for the inspiration.

Temari

Answer 2

too many.

Answer 3

Yes, unfortunately many.  Sad are they who die from within.  Well said.

Answer 4

As in, "What's your poison"

I would think, yes.

Answer 5

Many, and most have already past a point to be helped by mankind, they must now turn to a more powerful force to free themselves from the gravity which binds them.

Answer 6

I think it's different than the old cliché.  You can't judge a book by its cover.

I see it this way. Death’s dawning parades from the inside visible outwardly until the whole is lifeless.

Answer 7

I can think of a few...a very sad situation to be destroyed from within