Does this joke make sense? (It's English...)?

Question

I'm not a native English speaker, so...

does this joke make sense? anything that needs to be fixed? thank you.

"the one day, an elephant saw a camel pass by. He laughed at the camel and said, " Look, that is a freak with two b***s on its back." Camel looked back at him and replied," i don't talk to anyone who grows a p***s on his face."

haha... thanks again!

Answer 1

Just take off the word 'the' from the start and it's perfect!

Oh, also, change the word 'grows' to 'has'.

Answer 2

"One day..." then that'll be perfect. and not quite a bad joke!

Answer 3

Lol the average america could get it.

Here it is for you.

One day and elephant saw a camel passing by. He looked at the camel, and said "Look, this freak has two b***s on his back." The camel looked back and replied "I'm sorry, I don't talk to someone who has a p***s on his face."

Answer 4

Sounds ok to me.

Answer 5

Question:  Does this joke make sense? (It's English...)?

Answer:  Yes it does if you understand that the elephant must have seen a two-humped camel rather than an Arabian Dromedary (the one-humped camel.).  The two-humped camel is the:  Bactrian Camel and they are from Asia.  The Arabian Camel with only one hump is the one people usually think about when the word 'camel' is mentioned.  The Camel's reply to the elephant goes without saying and does not need to be repeated. LOL!

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