Does this look presentable and pretty? Advice?

Question

i made this website:

http://style.kaitlenisawesome.com

i was wondering if it's presentable and please don't give me any lectures on how i shouldnt be wearing makeup because i don't wear much, okay? just some tips on what to post and things to fix. thanks

Answer 1

yeah looks really good. full of info that girls will eat up!

Answer 2

you are beautiful the way you are. you don't need anymore make-up

serioulsly.

Answer 3

Yeah, I like it!

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Amused Contestant knows her stuff!

Answer 4

Very nice, I wish I had a website or something snazzy like that. I'd recommend capitalizing the appropriate words though, all of your sentences are in lowercase letters, and since you're only 13, it comes off as incompetent grammar skills rather than simply a style of writing for your website.

Answer 5

Very expressive. Nice layout, too, especially the BIG deal at the very top. That's a smart marketing skill.

I like the plain white background because it makes the viewers focus immediately on the items you're presenting to them.

Professionally speaking, the first letter of every sentence must be capitalized. Insert commas where needed. And brand names, like Revlon or Victoria's Secret are ALWAYS capitalized.

Answer 6

nice