I have to write about an Olympic sport. Here is my opening paragraph/sentence.
"Aquatics include many sub-categories such as water polo, synchronised swimming, 10km open water swim, swimming, relay and many more."
Does that make sense? Also, i don't know what to add, it seems a little too short to be a paragraph...i have been given ideas to write one paragraph about what i see, one about what can be heard, smelt, tasted, and touched/felt.
Thanks.
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