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Does this make sense to you? Can I have insight on a statement for a paper please?

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I cant figure out if my last sentence of my paper is good enough. Its on sexual identity and s*x and stuff...lol. Just tell me if you like it (the sentence that is)

Sometimes the opinions of s*x are better left unsaid, because a lust filled sexual encounter can occur at the sound of a few small words.

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  1. The sentence is great. Does it rephrase what you were talking about or have you introduced a new thought? If it is a new thought, no good. The last sentence summarizes what you were talking about.

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