Does this meet the qualifications?

Question

"No Risk Taken" - rondel

You have my love forever more,

my darling I will let you go.

Be not afraid, I'll let you know

when I have reached that foreign shore.

My fear ripped at my heart and tore

away the trust I could not show.

You have my love forever more,

my darling I will let you go.

And yes, I recollect we swore,

but words lost value long ago.

I beg you let my heartbeat slow,

though I don't know what lies in store--

you have my love forever more.

Answer 1

"Hi!",

Wow if only I could write like you.

These rondels arn't so easy. I am attempting one now. May post it tomorrow.

This is another wonderful poem that has captured my heart.

Answer 2

Looks like you did! And it's lovely too!

I asked for a "simple" challenge and Elaine suggested this form...Doesn't look so simple to me, but maybe I'll give it a shot.

Good show!

Answer 3

Very strong, almost perfect score. Well done.

Answer 4

Splendid rondel, meeting not only qualifications but I suspect acclaim.  If it were given to Froissart and Deschamps to peer across the centuries, they would be filled with warm admiration.