I wrote this poem for a guy I like. His name is Daniel. I just wrote this the other day. It's called Try. Tell me what you think!
I like you.
I’m not going to lie.
I’ll ask you flat out.
Do you want to try?
To you, I’m like a ghost.
Noticed by the teachers at most.
To me, I’m like a vampire.
Not craving your blood, but your affection.
I wanna try.
Do you want to try too?
If yes, cool.
I’ll see you ‘round school.
If you don’t want to try,
At least I was honest
And I might cry
But I won’t die.
It all depends.
Do you want to try?
I’ve known you for a long time.
Liked you for a while.
Now I have the courage.
I’ve gone an extra mile.
E-mail or call
And try not to stall.
But take your time.
And remember this: I want you to be mine.
I'll admit, it's not the best thing in the world, but seeing as I'm trying to start a career in writing, I need some help. So please give good criticism. Nothing that'll crush my 8th grade self. Thanks! :)
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