Does this poem have any spelling/Grammar errors? ?

Question

I have wrote my ideas. English is not my mother tong. so I need your help to find out errors, if there are any.

"I couldn't love you

Cols I can't make you mine

I Couldn't leave you

Cos you live in my mind

I couldn't forget you

Cos you are my everything

I couldn't kill me

Cos you'll be alone in this wold"

Answer 1

There are no grammar errors (good for you).  

But change COS to 'CAUSE.

and wold should be world (last line)

Answer 2

no such words as 'cols' nor 'wold 'be world.

and it isnt good grammar to say

'I couldn't kill me'

a) makes no sense ,should say 'I couldn't kill myself'  b ) depressing to mention killing yourself in a love poem!

Answer 3

Cols might be CAUSE, but even that is speaking language, in grammar we use BECAUSE; but in a poem CAUSE might be acceptable.

Also you cant say I COULDN'T KILL ME, it should be I COULDN'T KILL MYLSEF

WOLD in the last line should be WORLD

Did you come up with the poem?

Hmmmmm, pretty meaningful lines; but too short of a poem, make it bigger mate, and send it to me; and I would patent it by my name.......lol!