Does this poem need a room?

Question

"Melted Wax and Wine"

Limits freed,

only need

and devotion.

Love flickers.

In the dark,

black light spark.

Whisper my name.

Love flickers.

Lipstick press,

we undress

in the darkness.

Love flickers.

Hearts quiver,

lovers shiver,

our sweet release...

Love flames.

Answer 1

This is a good poem.

I like it I understand it.

At first I was confused, but after I read it again it all made sense.

Limits freed?

No, I don't think it needs a room.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Its a good poem!!!

Hope I helped!

- ♥ Taylor ♥

Answer 4

I'm too old for this, I need a cold shower

Answer 5

It doesn't need a room, but I might.

Beautiful and sensual.

Answer 6

Your poetry is the perfect source for my trifecta...

Pardon my interruption to your poem... but you so inspired me that I made a Trigee out of it... I pray it does not exceed community standards, but I know I may have pushed the limit.

Limits freed...Limits surpassed

only need...your body pressed to mine

and devotion...on my knees

Love flickers...with butterfly kisses

In the dark...I explore my senses

black light spark...my eyes cover your skin

Whisper my name...and I whisper erotically

Love flickers... feeling the heat of your body

Lipstick press... right through me

we undress...I tear through your clothes

in the darkness...my fingers exploring

Love flickers...giving you pleasure

Hearts quiver...as your legs quiver

lovers shiver...we collapse on the floor

our sweet release...to be one forever

Love flames...burning brightly evermore.

I loved your poem, can you tell by my answer?

add: it's too late to get a room.

and yes the meter (of my answer) wasn't exactly right but what

do you expect in 5-10-15 minutes of effort?

Answer 7

what do you mean, need a room?if you mean to say that its about s*x, then yeah, you're right. it definitely need a room. =D

Answer 8

Oh desire, how sweet the love not to mention the nicely written poetry!  Cheers!

Answer 9

No...outside is fun too...

Answer 10

The poem is lovely where it sits, but I need a cigarette...

Answer 11

What Dondi said.  Well written, and sensuous...