I've been writing this story. does it sound good. This is just the blurb:
In the world that winter lives in everything is different. people work day and night and are barley paid everything. At school, children are rminded of three rules constantly 1. you must never must touch your eyes 2. the unamed president (or refered to as the dictaor) is superior to all and everything and anything they do is for him 3. opinions are private and should be kept to yourself . the world,as described by winter, is grey and dark and missing something that she can't quite put her finger on . This missing thing is later described as of colour. IWnter, the main, belives taht the life she has isn't right and that she is determined for something better. Bigger. And she is . And she is determined for it soon.
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