Does this sound like a book you'd read??

Question

I am a unpublished author working on a story and just wondering if you'd read it!! Just tell me if you would, whether its good or bad idc! but quick overweiw, its about a girl and her bf dies, saving her. she goes into a coma, and people who are in comas can choose if they want to die, (but she can only stay with him if she dies,) or to live and take care of her baby niece.

I was eighteen, had a kid, with plans to go to college. I wanted to get married, to God-knows-who, and to live in a big red-brick house with a white picket fence. I never knew that these plans would change with a second’s notice. Life changing things. Like dieing, and having the choice. How are you supposed to choose? The choice of living, and taking care of your daughter, or dieing and staying with your one true love. Nobody should have to choose, but believe it or not, it happens to people every day.

Answer 1

it is a REALLY great idea for a story!!! BRAVO! keep it up!  

Answer 2

I'd read it tonight

Sounds original to me. I'd love to read more, but don't put it out on this forum, guard it and keep on writing (Thieves about).

Great idea, keep up the good work

Answer 3

i personally wouldnt read it cause im a fantasy nerd, but it sounds really cool so definetly keep going!

Answer 4

I may read it I don't think I would buy it but I would read it if it was at the library or something...sounds interesting.

Answer 5

Wow. Impressive.

I would read it, heck yes! I have not heard anything like that before, it sounds AMAZING.  

Answer 6

Oh yes! It sounds very interesting! It is most definitely something I would want to read!

Answer 7

OMG YES!!!!! KEEP US POSTED WHEN U GET PUBLISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW I WONDER WHAT SHE CHOOSES!!!!!!! HAVE U CHOSEN A TITLE YET?!

Answer 8

Yes, I probably would. Sounds interesting, but it depends on how you develop the plot...

Answer 9

i would read it.  

Answer 10

1) I thought you said she had to take care of her niece?? She says its her daughter..

2) dying is spelled this way

3) how does she not know who she wants to get married to? Isn't the dilemma between dying and being with the guy or staying with the kid?

4) It does not happen to people everyday

5) It would seem like the good choice would be to go with the daughter-the kid needs a parent. Though I'm not sure she deserves this mother-one who takes a whole book to decide whether or not their kid is worth living for.

6) you have a couple of sentence fragments in there-which is a lot considering it's only a paragraph long.

7) I would not read this-especially if the whole story is going to be narrated by this woman.

8) Red brick? Seriously?!?

Answer 11

yeah i would love to read that i hope it goes to the shelf because i would definaltly buy it the whole thing about choosing to be with your kid or your bf is a hard choice to pick