Does this sound like a good book...?

Question

I got the original idea for this from an online plot generator but switched it up so much its not even recognizable.

Our story takes place in London, from the point of view of Chrysanthe Greene. Her family calls her the evil twin compared to her darling sister Ruthie. She has been brought up to believe that she doesn't belong on this earth. However, Chrys embraces the dislike and rebels against society. The twenty-four year old has no friends after her fellow rebel died in a car crash. This finds Chrys wandering off to London after an insane urge told her to.

There, she runs into Theodore Fox, a mysterious man with piercing blue eyes hidden by his dark fringe. He lives behind books and generally follows what his very respectable parents command, including the engagement to one Lucille Pritchard, the best match for a descendant in the Fox lineage. Theo doesn't bother to rebel at all, choosing to be indifferent instead.

A certain Simon Wood appears to be a close friend to Theo, but really is Lucy's secret lover and is only trying to stay close to her forced fiance. However, when Chrys meets Simon, he is instantly captivated and leaves Lucy to pursue her.

Unfortunately for everybody, Theo and Chrys fall in love, and it turns out that that is absolutely forbidden by Theo's family because of an age-old grudge between Chrys's ancestors and theirs. This unbelievable adventure stretches beyond the limit when it is discovered that Theo is far from what he appears to be.

Answer 1

sounds like film noir crossed with manga, you may of accidentally created a whole new genre.  

Answer 2

it sounds pretty good. obviously there was a lot thrown out in the the paragraph so just make sure that u keep it very detailed. also i think it would be good if Theo was a brother the "good one" and that they can compare and constract ideas and stuff like that. but otherwise defiantly work out it :)

Answer 3

That sounds like it would be a good book, and I would love to read it when it's finished! ^_^ Let me know how it's coming :)

Answer 4

That sounds like a great read! Its not a new plot, but it sounds like it has a slight modern/fantasy twist in it, which makes it better!