Does this sound like a good idea? If so, would you read this? Thanks?

Question

When Brittany Snow enters her night shift at St.Angela's Hospital, it seems like another typical afternoon into night for her, but when three badly wounded hikers appear in the hospital crying for help, her whole world turns upside down. Doctors immediately prep for surgery.

6 hours later, police receive a 911 call of a woman asking for help before screaming in terror. Then the line goes dead.

When police arrive at the hospital, they are shocked to find Brittany, one of the hikers, and a man visiting his sister at the hospital huddled together in fear inside a secured room, and everyone else, dead.

Does it sound good? That's all I need to know to continue.

Thanks!!

Answer 1

Wellm it's not bad, but it sounds really familiar to 28 days later, blindness, the latest m. night shallaham movie and the like.  The sort of sci-fi thriller of a freaky epidemic that kills everyone.

Interesting intro, but make sure you keep it original.

Answer 2

that does sound good!

i wanna hear the rest!

Answer 3

i like it - sounds very good

Answer 4

It could be. I MIGHT read it. But probably not, it's just not my genre. I'm more of a fantasy person.

But I'm sure other people would really like it. Sounds original and you could build a pretty could plot with lots of subplots. You should write it.  

Answer 5

interesting :)

Answer 6

very interseting and so mysterious. if ur writting a book u should becuause i would luv to read it. i luv these kinds of books. so amazing and a great idea. great job and plz vote me for best answer i really need the points :P

Answer 7

this is very good, but i hope this is the summery because its so vague.

i would definitely read it if it was made into a book. you have such a good imagination.

Answer 8

um.....no! no,no im kidding dont get angry i like it very much. id read when my mother lets me or when i get older either one.

Answer 9

     Sounds as though you have the makings of quite a story there.  Keep at it.  It should be very interesting

Good luck

Mike B

Answer 10

Hmm is it supposed to be a summary or an article?  I'm kind of unsure who the main character is--Brittany?

It sounds like it's going to be some kind of awesome thriller novel and I think it has potential ;)