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Does this sound too corny?

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Okay, so I am 14 years old and the girl I loved moved. She had no choice in the matter, they couldn't stay, and I never got to say goodbye.

Now before you go ahead and say "love" is a strong and naive word, I know the feeling. I would follow her to the end of the earth.

ANYWAY, every time she came to my house, she instantly fell for me. And she dumped her boyfriend at the drop of a hat the first time we hung out. However, I can't stop thinking about her and the fact I never got to say goodbye. The move was spontaneous and yeah.. *explaining is done*

I want to leave a message on her answering machine, giving her all of those bottled up feelings, but I don't want to sound desperate or corny. She doesn't live that far away, but I still want to see her, and I want to get in a kiss or at least a goodbye. Anyway I was gonna leave a message like this

Hey ____ it's _____ . I know I didn't get a chance to say goodbye, and I just wanted to say that you were the greatest friend I have ever had, and I want to wish you good luck in ____ . I can't describe in words the connection I had with you for the past few years, and I hope to see or talk to you again soon. You are the best thing that the guy a street away could ever wish for, and I know you will make someone truly happy someday. Have fun, and talk to you later.

While writing this, I felt as though a huge opportunity came waltzing by, and I missed it. I couldn't even think of anything. It all seemed to corny and other things just fizzled out. Anyway, help me out with this one YAnswers, and please don't say anything bad. Positive advice and/or comments to what I am going to say would help.

Thanks,

Kevin

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  1. You write very well for someone your age. I sense that you might have a future as a writer. As for what you want to say, it's not the least bit corny, in fact, it's rather sweet, but not too sweet. I would tell her exactly what you wrote. I'm sure she will appreciate it. Trust. ';-)

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