Does this video make a good point. please help?

Question

does this video make sense and make you want to change or do something about it?

what could it use for improvement

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Fvl_AgTtRQ

Answer 1

Honestly speaking it is a great video. You have chosen a new way to express feelings. It got nice background music.

The start is good because of close up.

The background music is best chosen.

The topic in text are so real.

BUT one big problem usually I Flag such video which could hurt someone WHAT? yes showing knife, what if kid or someone watch this and apply? we must also think who will watch video for that at least write some warning.

Overall very good video. I hope you do not mind my comments. I wanted to put 5 stars and comments but waiting to add later if you add some words of warning ind video information.