Does this work for trigee?

Question

A LIFE MADE OF THE POETIC DANCE

by Jack Danube

We are born & we shall die..................Another day;

We shall laugh & we shall cry..............Trite as the rest.

It suffices us, to say...........................Life as the test;

We are born to light the way................To stay or stray.

We can choose the life banal...............To hold the course

Or give answer to the call................... Of the Unknown.

To live the dream of full force...............Seeing the shown

Being refined or coarse........................Of intercourse.

Here we destroy & create.....................Self-Awarenes...

Undoing notions of fate........................By knowing chance.

By learning to know a mate..................We brave the mess.

Ourselves are all we shall see..............Making advance

With others, we know the we................As more or less

A life made of poetry,..........................A kind of dance.

Answer 1

Tell me why  ?

The hardest feeling in this world....

Is when you are misjudged  

When you are alone in this world ...

Is when your love is not felt

When you speak from the heart.....

Is when you are not heard

When you try to move forward ...

Is when every thing is pushing you back

When you find someone you feel happy with ....

Is when you lose a piece of your heart

Answer 2

This not only works, it excels. It's one of the best trigee/s that I've read thus far. Fantastic title. I found it true to form, and true to life...

...thank you for the dance...

Temari

Answer 3

They get better and better all the time.

Answer 4

yea

Answer 5

Works extremely well for Trigee, in my opinion.

I love the last line(s).

Answer 6

Who are you trying to fool...?  (cool poetic entry, though...)

It's all about deeply disturbing rock music, pizza, alcohol, getting laid, and occasional moments of embarassment in a Catholic Church Confessional Booth...

(I hear those are the top things you need to appreciate to be a good spy...)