Don't you love poems? please check out these.

Question

well if you do, check at out these three poems and tell me which one is the best. Rates (0 to 10) and comments will be welcome. (note: 2 of them are not mine).

Just a kiss from you.

My eyes are closed

and my mind is filled

with a thousand thoughts

and a thousand dreams.

Onto my cheek, warm sensation:

a treasure,

more precious than gold;

priceless,

it never gets old.

It's a kiss from you,

just a kiss from you.

So simple but so deep

so soft and so slick

It's the source of my dreams

by the reach of your lips

onto my cheek

it transposes my being

onto a place where no other being

has ever been and will never be.

I feel invincible at this moment.

I can see the invisible at this instant.

Thanks to a touch from a goddess

straight down from the heavens:

It's a secret bond between you and me.

It makes me strong and gets me filled

with all the joy and makes me reach the sun.

It's a kiss from you,

just a kiss from you.

When I open my eyes, I am back to earth

to real life, and all its lies; it is so absurd.

but what I experienced, for a few moments

was beyond unreal and everything else:

it was a sign, it gave me hope.

Now I know

that you and I

are meant to be.

It was a kiss from you,

just a kiss from you.

Phenomenal Woman

Pretty women wonder where my secret lies.

I'm not cute or built to suit a fashion model's size

But when I start to tell them,

They think I'm telling lies.

I say,

It's in the reach of my arms

The span of my hips,

The stride of my step,

The curl of my lips.

I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.

I walk into a room

Just as cool as you please,

And to a man,

The fellows stand or

Fall down on their knees.

Then they swarm around me,

A hive of honey bees.

I say,

It's the fire in my eyes,

And the flash of my teeth,

The swing in my waist,

And the joy in my feet.

I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.

Men themselves have wondered

What they see in me.

They try so much

But they can't touch

My inner mystery.

When I try to show them

They say they still can't see.

I say,

It's in the arch of my back,

The sun of my smile,

The ride of my b*****s,

The grace of my style.

I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.

Now you understand

Just why my head's not bowed.

I don't shout or jump about

Or have to talk real loud.

When you see me passing

It ought to make you proud.

I say,

It's in the click of my heels,

The bend of my hair,

the palm of my hand,

The need of my care,

'Cause I'm a woman

Phenomenally.

Phenomenal woman,

That's me.

LIFE

-Life is not a bed of roses,

-Life is not enchanting,

-Life is unpredictable,

-Life is a journey to be made to gain maturity.

-Life could be disappointing,

-Life could be devastating.

-Life could also be saddening.

-Life could be a sunshine,

-Life could be a dilemma.

-Life could be a heart ache,

-Life could be a rainbow.

-But above all;

Life is a mystery and free for all to explore.

Answer 1

Honestly, i love all of your poems. Just a kiss from you ill give a 7. Its not because it wasn't good, this poem is just not in my tastes. You need to put more feeling in it, give me an image. You're talking about love, and a sort of anticipation for a sort of satisfaction and pleasure. use these tones to better describe these feeling more creativity and descriptively. You're  the one who has the idea, i don't know you, I'm just the reader. Bring me into your vision. Phenomenal Woman, ill give a 8, because to me, it has a strong message to me. I see you're idea, and the image is hazy and grainy, but its just not strong enough. I really like the repetition of the words, good rhythm , but again, try to do the thing that i mentioned earlier. LIFE, has alot of potential to it. Honestly, ill give this one a 5. To me, it just seems dull. You say that life is not a bed of roses, not enchanting etc, but these are just words. Poetry gives you the ability to describe these emotions more creatively. For this one, i was just reading a poem, that was it. All of youre poems have potential, and i really like all of them. But remember, that these are my opinions that aren't necessarily right.

         Poetry is a very delicate topic to go on. Because for some one to like poetry, it all depends on tastes. I sometimes find my poetry to go against everything i just told you.  But i keep working on them.Just remember that poetry to me is int about having a high vocabulary or using phrases that takes a whole class to interpret. But the ability to make the reader, see and feel what youre talking about. And as i always say, a poem is never done. I hope to see more of youre pieces.