Drama homework help!! CAN U PLZ put dis is 9th grade wording!!!!!?

Question

The raven himself is hoarse

That croaks the fatal entrance of Duncan

Under my battlements. Come, you spirits

That tend on mortal thoughts, unsex me here,

And fill me from the crown to the toe top-full

Of direst cruelty! make thick my blood;

Stop up the access and passage to remorse,

That no compunctious visitings of nature

Shake my fell purpose, nor keep peace between

The effect and it! Come to my woman's b*****s,

And take my milk for gall, you murdering ministers,

Wherever in your sightless substances

You wait on nature's mischief! Come, thick night,

And pall thee in the dunnest smoke of h**l,

That my keen knife see not the wound it makes,

Nor heaven peep through the blanket of the dark,

To cry 'Hold, hold!'

Answer 1

I think it's fine the way it is. I'm a ninth grader and that's how I write stories and poems. So don't change it. Leave it like it is.

Answer 2

I think it is fine

Answer 3

take a few words and use a thesaurus. you don't need to change every line just take some of those words and write down a simpiler word.