Drama. poem, tell me what you think.?

Question

she left the party half past three. the rumors flew for someone thought it would be aball but no body knew how far she'd fall. there was no on to help her up, no one to take her hand. her pain was pain full, it was tearing students down, not on would take a stand.

with that the lady on the news said it all; the girl wouldn't be coming back to school,not that day,not ever. the whispers stopped, no eyes me the stares dropped. it all started with a little drama. they said they hated it.

but they created it.

Answer 1

I think with a little bit of revision and some different phrasing that it would make a good poem. One that will sent out a message.

Nice job!

(Would you be so kind as to find and answer mine?)

:)