Dream Poem. Comments, Advice?

Question

I had a dream my boyfriend wrote me this poem.

It's not word for word as it was in my dream.

But this is the best I could do, from what I remember.

Dream Poem

Sunday, August 10th

You came into my life,

so beautiful and young.

You came into my life,

I know you're not the one.

I thought I knew you,

I thought I understood.

Confusion caught me,

I wish it never would.

You've made me think of who you are,

in a completely different way.

You've made me think of what you are,

here and now and on this great day.

You've shown me the way,

and given me the light.

I know everything will be alright.

It was hard to see you.

Now you've shown me who you are.

I know you,

I understand you.

I want to be with you.

You are the one.

Any comments?

Answer 1

that sounds so beautiful and true. and this came form a dream? you should publish that!