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Drifting away?

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you ask me about all the things you desire

i give you all the ways to recieve

your heart burns like fire

but from your soul you bleed

my words are distant in your mind

you perfer to sulk and need

i cant save you if you lie to your self

because your afraid to see

reality dosnt have to be the lies you choose to believe

i wish i could show you your self

then maybe you could be free

im sorry your blind to the love you have

the love that comes from me

but its hard to feel when your the living dead

your becoming hard for me to see

your slowly drifting away from me

im floating out to sea

the world has changed forever

theres nothing left for us to be

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  1. Very nice enjoyed it and perfect title for your poem!!  Cheers!!!


  2. Hey? I was so immersed that when I got to the end, I thought hope was around the corner. But that's okay, sorrow can rule the day and it is healthy to have it to keep our minds strong and honest. I would've simply called it, The Wanderer. For my next trick, I shall use titles of U2 songs with slow, intense lyrics... How many song titles and album cover titles did I mention? Hmmmmmm...

    THE WANDERER

    The Sweetest Things You Desire

    My Wild Horses You Tried To Tame,

    You Took Me To An Unforgettable Fire

    Where The City Streets Have No Name.

    Sunday Bloody Sunday

    There was Pride In The Name Of Love,

    Blue Angels Over Harlem

    Stuck In A Moment You Can't Get Out Of.

    CHORUS:

    In God's Country

    I Will Follow

    Staring At The Sun,

    The Mysterious Ways

    I'ts A Beautiful Day

    Two Hearts Can Beat As One

    One.

    I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For

    Sometimes It Can Be So Cruel,

    When Love Comes To Town

    It's Usually With Or Without You

    The Fly Got Some Elevation

    Surrender On New Years Day,

    At Zoo Station I Bought A Lemon

    Ultraviolet Gonna Light My Way

    Until the End Of The World...

    BRIDGE:

    The Age Of Zooropa

    October Brings War,

    So Bullet The Blue Skies

    This Last Night On Earth...
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