Edited my poem. What do you think?

Question

Today I checked back in,

To hotel reality,

I realized some things,

That had escaped me,

I remember now,

My Heavenly Father cares,

And wants me to be happy,

He listens to my prayers,

And the boy I love,

Would do anything for me,

It makes me cry with joy,

To look into his eyes and see,

I can spill my heart,

Release my looming fears,

Remove the heavy doubt,

Cast off the weight of the years,

I should have never thought,

Even for a few seconds,

I could possibly be alone,

When love just beckons.

Answer 1

"Hotel reality," I like that.  And your rhyme scheme works well too.  Nice work.  Have you chosen a title?

Answer 2

Change the 4th line in the 4th verse to:

Cast off the weight of years.

Answer 3

Great poem, I really like it.