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Ehh a what do tink of this poem.[i think its horrible]?

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roses are red

violets are blue

there is nothing more impossible that getting with you

your looks are so fine

theres no way that you'll be mine

i cant imagine a day when our lips collide

but until that day ill hold this a secret

because i cant handle anything more that reject

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  1. secret and reject do not rhyme

    otherwise its fine


  2. Half of your poem rhymes and the latter half doesn't.  You're right, poems don't HAVE to rhyme, but consistency is VERY important.  Stick with one style and it will sound better.

  3. it's sweet i guess

    a little bit too focused on looks

    not bad

    keep writing!

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