Ei guys, wanna gimme some rhyming wurdz 4 my poem?

Question

it's a "deep" poem bout a swimming race

i've written like, 4 stanzas already...

one of the stanzas go like dis:

I do feel that feeling,

that happiness I discover

The one I am revealing

From underneath the water

:) P.S. it's an English assignment 4 hy scool

Answer 1

does it have to rhyme? i don't like rhyming poems but i will give you some words from a site...no wait i'll give you the whole site

http://www.rhymezone.com/

Answer 2

i would drop the 'neath' cos with it there are too many syllables and that throws out the feminine rhyme

and water and discover already don't rhyme so why the sudden need to rhyme?

Answer 3

Erm ... what is hy school? And what are wurdz? Anyway, I don't underdtand why it HAS to rhyme....