Emilys bad dream?

Question

Monday mornings

Hang upside down

Pontoon

today

Gone is a moon

Shanghaied

Emily collects her tears

in a heart shaped box

no work today

makes her feel

mild & meek

for she feels

she cant really speak?

Her eyes a dewed

Turn into pools

Floating into dream ponds

aching leaves freeze outside

birds crouch under her eaves

away from Septembers freeze

moments like these squeeze

lemon drops into silent cups

she tries

to figure out

this figure eight

that’s called life

is a working life over

once it hits over forty ?

she doesn’t know how to take

maybe she can fake

happiness to make it ?

afternoons appear to crash

a mirror has been broken

silence twilight

unforsaken tokens

Answer 1

Wonderful!

Answer 2

take out the last two lines, separate this into stanzas and we are talking business! Really like it. Lots of great description. ORIGINAL, too. :]