English - Spanish translators?

Question

Hi all! Maybe someone can tell me if this text I wrote is good in both languages? Thanks a lot.

English: http://www.shvoong.com/movies/1833726-wall-e/

Spanish: http://es.shvoong.com/movies/1833735-wall-e/

Answer 1

Well, I read the spanish version and I found one single misspelling, here it is:

"Beven todas sus comidas con una pajita..."

It should be "Beben" and not "Beven".

That's all.

Answer 2

I have to say that it has been perfectly written, in Spanish and English, I cannot even write that in either English nor Spanish, good job.