English correction help!!!!?

Question

can u help me to correct the following text ? thxxxx

The text is about the discovery of the new continent australia by james cook. he describes the life of the aborigines on the new land.

In 1770, after Cooks first launch, he was resent to Australia on behalf of the British King in order to take possession of the eastern coast in Australia.

During his mission, Cook met some aborigines with whom he coulnt communicate at all. Thus He was forced to go back and stay on his boat to keep observing.

Although the tribe didnt seem to be as cultivated as they were, Cook was faszinated about their weapons and way to live

Answer 1

The text is about the discovery of the new continent, Australia by James Cook. He describes the life of the Aborigines on the New Land.

In 1770, after Cooks' first launch, he was resent to Australia on behalf of the British King in order to take possession of the eastern coast in Australia.

During his mission, Cook met some Aborigines with whom he coudn't communicate at all. Thus he was forced to go back and stay on his boat to keep observing.

Although the tribe didnt seem to be as cultivated as they were, Cook was fascinated about their weapons and way of life.

That's the best i got - hope it helps  =]

Answer 2

You shd have a comma before an after Australia.  

Answer 3

this is what i think is the correct passage....

In 1770 after Cook's first launch, he was resent to Australia in behalf of the British king in order to take possession of the eastern coast in Australia. During his mission, Cook met some aborigines with whom he couldn't communicate at all. Thus he was forced to go back and stay on his boat to keep observing.

Although the tribe didn't seem to be as cultivated as they were. Cook was fascinated about their weapons and way to live.

that's my best shot. hope that helps  

Answer 4

In 1770, after Cook's first landing, he was re-turned to Australia on orders of King George III,  to claim possession of the eastern coast of Australia for the British Crown.

During his mission, Cook met some Aborigines, but found he was unable to communicate with them. Consequently he was forced to go remain on on his ship, and observe them from there.

Although the Aborigines did not seem to be as cultivated as they probably were, Cook was fascinated by their weapons and way of life.

alternatively

Although the Aboriginies were primitves, Cook was fascinated by the weapons they had made, and the way of life they followed.