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Can someone please check if the message below is grammatically correct. Could somone please correct my mistakes. I am a teacher in an indian university and i need to send the work below in english. I am not very good at it so could someone please check to see if it ok. I am sending the letter to my uni student. Thanks

Dear Isaac,

Your marks for the year 2007/2008 are as follows

Mathematics 1: 47%

CA: 55%

DSD: 63%

Micro Project: 87%

EMD: 62%

Communications and Measurements: 59%

Energy Transport and Control: 64%

JAVA: 81%

Micro 1: 75%

EMF: 55%

ECD: 49%

Mathematics 2: 37%

Unfortunately you have failed the Mathematics 2 exam and will be required to resit it on the 18th of August and 28th of August. The exam will be each 1 hour long and will be both held in SSB A19 at 9.45AM.

On a happier note I want to congratulate you on your excellent microcomputer project results. You scored in the top 10 in the course and have thus received a mobile as a prize. The mobile is the new Sony Ericsson X1.

Good luck for your resits and will look forward to seeing you on the 16th of September.

Regards

Praneet

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  1. Dear Isaac,

    Your marks for the year 2007/2008 are as follows;

    Mathematics 1: 47%

    CA: 55%

    DSD: 63%

    Micro Project: 87%

    EMD: 62%

    Communications and Measurements: 59%

    Energy Transport and Control: 64%

    JAVA: 81%

    Micro 1: 75%

    EMF: 55%

    ECD: 49%

    Mathematics 2: 37%

    Unfortunately you have failed the Mathematics 2 exam and will be required to retake it on the 18th of August and 28th of August. Each exam will be 1 hour long and will taken in SSB A19 at 9.45AM.

    On a happier note I want to congratulate you on your excellent microcomputer project results. You scored in the top 10 in the course and have thus received a mobile as a prize. The mobile is the new Sony Ericsson X1.

    Good luck with your retakes and will look forward to seeing you on the 16th of September.

    Regards.

    Praneet

    this is how i would do it


  2. Yes it looks fine only if they have to do the resit on either 18th august or 28th august why have you put you will see them in September??

    I also don't understand all of the capital letters eg. SSB A19 what is that??
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