English natives! Does this texts need to be edited before publishing online? Thanks in advance?

Question

Hi all,

I want to set these texts as the title and description of my website pages for search engines. I don’t want to change them if they don’t include any grammatical errors. The keywords which are used are very very important to me, because people use them for finding the websites like mine. So I more prefer not to change them. I know using some of them is not correct from view point of “technical phrases”, such as “domain name generator”. But I want to use them because some beginners use them on the web. Just if there are any unusual sentences which seem wrong help me modify. Please take into consideration I have limitation in using the number of words! So don’t try to tell a story!

Hope my text doesn’t need any major changes. Thank you in advance!

**** TITLES ******

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******** DESCRIPTIONS************

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Thanks in advance,

Answer 1

"Cheapest Domain Registrar – Get your url like www.name.com"

i would change that to "Get a URL like www.name.com."

also, the "Free" in the second paragraph under the descriptions should be lower-case - "free," since it's not a name of something, nor is it a proper noun.

other than that, it's fine.