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When I first decided to study in this field at BIHE, I really liked to major in linguistics, get my B.A. here in Iran, and then go abroad to get my M.A. and onward! But after a couple of terms when I got more acquainted with the materials studied in both ‘linguistics’ and ‘English literature’, I changed my idea as I found Literature much more interesting! So, I decided to continue studying Literature! Now, two years have passed from that decision and almost everything has changed! I have changed a lot, the situation of Iran has changed a lot… and as we have experienced in the previous year, many Iranians are ready to hear the message of Baha’u’llah. So, what UHJ asks the Iranian Bahai Youth to do really gives me a view wider than I had imagined before! So, on the one hand, I believe the best thing to do is to stay in Iran and do according to the guidance of the UHJ. On the other, Master’s education for Literature is not yet established at BIHE. The most important thing to me today is to put ‘teaching the faith’ at the center of my life and then arrange the rest of things around it! If the situation of Iran remains the same in the coming years, I guess I will postpone M.A and all! But if they started it in Iran, I would willingly participate in it… What do you suggest me to do?

By the way, wish your son luck!

Answer 1

When I first chose to study in this field at BIHE I decided i'd like to major in linguistics and get my B.A. in Iran. Once i got my B.A I planned to go abroad to get my M.A. and onward. After a couple of terms I achieved more acquainted with the materials studied in both ‘linguistics’ and ‘English literature.

          

I later changed my idea as I found Literature much more interesting so I decided to continue studying Literature. Now two years have passed from that decision and almost everything has changed. I have changed a lot, the situation of Iran has changed a lot and as we have experienced in the previous year, many Iranians are ready to hear the message of Baha’u’llah. UHJ asks the Iranian Bahai youth to  really gives me a view wider than I had imagined before.

        

  On the one hand I believe the best thing to do is to stay in Iran and do according to the guidance of the UHJ, on the other a Master’s education for Literature is not yet established at BIHE. The most important thing to me today is to put ‘teaching the faith’ at the center of my life and then arrange the rest of things around it. If the situation of Iran remains the same in the coming years I guess I will postpone M.A . If they started it in Iran, I would willingly participate in it. What do you suggest me to do?

Answer 2

When I decided to study in this field at BIHE, I really wanted to major in linguistics, get my B.A. here in Iran, and then go abroad to get my M.A.! But after a couple of terms when I got more acquainted with the materials studied in both linguistics and English literature, I changed my idea as I found Literature much more interesting! So, I decided to continue studying Literature! Now, two years have passed since that decision, and almost everything has changed! I have changed a lot, the situation with Iran has changed a lot… and as we have experienced in the previous year, many Iranians are ready to hear the message of Baha’u’llah. So, what UHJ asks the Iranian Bahai Youth to do really gives me a view wider than I had imagined before! So, on the one hand, I believe the best thing to do is to stay in Iran and go according to the guidance of the UHJ. On the other, Master’s education for Literature is not yet established at BIHE. The most important thing to me today is to put ‘teaching the faith’ at the center of my life and then arrange everything else! If the situation of Iran remains the same in the coming years, I guess I will postpone my M.A! But if they started it in Iran, I would willingly participate in it… What do you suggest me to do?

By the way, wish your son luck!

On a side note, I would take out about half of those exclamation! points.  There are too many !s

Answer 3

When I first decided to study in this field at BIHE, I really wanted to major in linguistics, get my B.A. here in Iran, then go abroad to get my M.A. and onward! But after a couple of terms, when I got more acquainted with the materials I had studied in both ‘linguistics’ and ‘English literature’, I changed my mind for I found that Literature was much more interesting! Therefore, I decided to continue studying Literature. Two years have passed from that decision and almost everything has changed! I have changed a lot, the situation in Iran has changed a lot… and as we have experienced in the previous year, many Iranians are ready to hear the message of Baha’u’llah. So, what UHJ asks the Iranian Bahai Youth to do really gives me a view wider than I had imagined before! On the one hand, I believe the best thing to do is to stay in Iran and act according to the guidance of the UHJ. On the other, Master’s education for Literature is not yet established at BIHE. The most important thing to me today is to put ‘teaching the faith’ at the center of my life and then arrange the rest of things around it! If the situation in Iran remains the same in the coming years, I guess I will postpone M.A and all. But if they started it in Iran, I would willingly participate in it… What do you suggest I do?

By the way, wish your son luck!

Answer 4

heh?

looks fine to me.

Answer 5

no relation to Language section

post it in Education

Answer 6

Looks pretty good except take out a few exclamation points.  

Answer 7

¡Yo no deseo leer eso. yo no puedo comprender lo que dice. por qué es tan complicó. deseo que una hamburguesa de queso y frío y un batido de la fresa para libre!