Erm this is lame but,?

Question

Yeah, I know this is a stupid poem that I wrote

But erm, what do you think of it. It took me a minute

and its quite obvious that it did but yeah, just wondering

:|

Hush, Dont speak to me.

I am just sick of it!

It-

as in absolutely everything.

I'm done-

With trying to keep things alive.

Im sick of struggling-

By trying to see the light.

I am tired-

Of these foolish games,

that everyone seems to play.

All I hear is-

these goddamned lies.

The only thing I want is-

to know the truth.

All I see is-

these fake smiles.

I am giving up-

on trying to read between the lines.

The sad thing is-

I have no one anymore

I have nothing-

nothing to believe;

And I am sick of it-

your making my heart bleed.

Answer 1

emo much?

Answer 2

it sounds really good

your talking about life and it's cool

if you're not a poet you should become one.