Eulogy for Virginia... 10 years and its still like yesterday. comments on form and cadence please?

Question

Eulogy for Virginia

In the eye of this minds memory

there floats a boat

churning bottom

trailing silver threads

of a numbing northern water

in its wake

I watch the little waves

leap to embrace the baited line

hungry

like inexplicable friendships

smoldering now inside memories mind

grief still ravenous like your death.

Answer 1

"Hi!!"

That was a beautiful Eulogy.

I'm sorry to hear of your loss.

Thx for sharing and portraying such imagery within the sadness. It really displays such devotion and love for Virginia.

Cheers : )

Answer 2

Very visually stated. Grief never ends, time does not heal, it just dulls the pain.  I hope that ravenous grief will go on a diet soon.

Answer 3

Powerful, beautifully written and raw with grief.  I hope that the writing of this "Eulogy for Virginia" was healing for you.  Each line is eloquent, and the flow is graceful from image to image. Just a beautiful and meaningful work. Thank you.

Answer 4

A poignant and powerful reminisce.  Obviously a wonderful friend that's gone.  My compliments on the tribute.

Answer 5

Very touching words well said.

Yet I think there is more in you yet to express of this loss.