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Everyon says this poem ive written sound alot like another..please read and help?

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ive google searched it to see if it sound like anything else but nothing has come up ...the whole poem wont fit but i will post as much as i can, and tell me if it sounds like another poem...and what poem is it?

I have learnt That Im dumb,

fat ugly and Bad,

And I've learnt it's

my fault Daddys so mad.

I wish I wasnt dumb

Fat Ugly And Bad

Then Maybe My Mommy

would Finally be glad.

I know not to speak at all,

or do any wrong

otherwise im locked up inside

All day long

When i leave my Room

Im all alone

Its quiet and Dark The 'rents arent home,

Whe mommy does return,

I tell her she looks nice

and maybe ill get just one beating tonight.

Shh Dont make a sound i just herd A Car,

I know for shore ,

My daddys back from the bar

I run For my room and lock

The dooor hoping these terrible nights

wont happen no more.

But I Hear him Swear

And My name he Calls

I slowly move back

And try to dissapear into the walls.

I try and Hide

From his hate filled eyes

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  1. I'm with the first anwser.


  2. it reminds me of the poem called misty...

    "Misty"

    My name is Misty

    I'm only three,

    My eyes are swollen

    I cannot see,

    I must be stupid

    I must be bad,

    What else could have

    Made my daddy so mad?

    I wish I were better

    I wish I weren't ugly,

    Then maybe my mommy

    Would still want to hug me.

    I can't speak at all

    I can't do a wrong

    Or else I'm locked up

    All the day long.

    When I awake

    I'm all alone

    The house is dark

    My folks aren't home.

    When my mommy does come

    I'll try and be nice,

    So maybe I'll get just

    One whipping tonight.

    Don't make a sound!

    I just heard a car

    My daddy is back

    From Charlie's Bar.

    I hear him curse,

    My name he calls,

    I press myself

    Against the wall.

    I try and hide

    From his evil eyes,

    I'm so afraid now

    I'm starting to cry.

    He finds me weeping,

    He shouts ugly words,

    He says its my fault

    That he suffers at work.

    He slaps me and hits me

    And yells at me more,

    I finally get free

    And I run for the door.

    He's already locked it

    And I start to bawl,

    He takes me and throws me

    Against the hard wall.

    I fall to the floor

    With my bones nearly broken,

    And my daddy continues

    With more bad words spoken.

    "I'm sorry!", I scream,

    But its much too late.

    His face has been twisted

    Into unimaginable hate.

    The hurt and the pain

    Again and again.

    Oh please God, have mercy!

    Oh please let it end!

    And he finally stops

    And heads for the door,

    While I lay there motionless

    Sprawled on the floor.

    My name is Misty

    And I am but three,

    Tonight my daddy

    Murdered me.

  3. yea, its like a poem that was going around through chain mail

    My name is Misty

    I'm only three,

    My eyes are swollen

    I cannot see,

    I must be stupid

    I must be bad,

    What else could have

    Made my daddy so mad?

    I wish I were better

    I wish I weren't ugly,

    Then maybe my mommy

    Would still want to hug me.

    I can't speak at all

    I can't do a wrong

    Or else I'm locked up

    All the day long.

    When I awake

    I'm all alone

    The house is dark

    My folks aren't home.

    When my mommy does come

    I'll try and be nice,

    So maybe I'll get just

    One whipping tonight.

    Don't make a sound!

    I just heard a car

    My daddy is back

    From Charlie's Bar.

    I hear him curse,

    My name he calls,

    I press myself

    Against the wall.

    I try and hide

    From his evil eyes,

    I'm so afraid now

    I'm starting to cry.

    He finds me weeping,

    He shouts ugly words,

    He says its my fault

    That he suffers at work.

    He slaps me and hits me

    And yells at me more,

    I finally get free

    And I run for the door.

    He's already locked it

    And I start to bawl,

    He takes me and throws me

    Against the hard wall.

    I fall to the floor

    With my bones nearly broken,

    And my daddy continues

    With more bad words spoken.

    "I'm sorry!", I scream,

    But its much too late.

    His face has been twisted

    Into unimaginable hate.

    The hurt and the pain

    Again and again.

    Oh please God, have mercy!

    Oh please let it end!

    And he finally stops

    And heads for the door,

    While I lay there motionless

    Sprawled on the floor.

    My name is Misty

    And I am but three,

    Tonight my daddy

    Murdered me.

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