Everyone says im a good poet, am i?

Question

this is the first poem i wrote....let me know what you think..

My feelings for you were so real, but now my heart is in pieces and i dont think it could ever heal.

You were once my entire life, I truly believe

one day i'd become your wife.

I believed your every lie, except for the time

you told me goodbye. I fell in love with you so fast,

but i guess this "thing" with us could never last.

I loved you so much but why couldnt i see,

that you and i just weren't meant to be?......

Answer 1

yes, im stealing this poem,thanks

Answer 2

I like the poem, from what I can tell

this is about a relationship or marriage

that went sour because of the lies

Your husband betrayed your trust

You had feelings for him you felt

the same

The love was so quick

you didn't see what he was like

in time,

until one day you became his wife

and he walked out on you

You said that last line very well

All I can say is shame on him.

Answer 3

Yes a very good free verse poem.  If it is your first you are quite talented.

Answer 4

wow i really like that poem

your a good poet

Answer 5

That was really good ^^

Answer 6

yes you are, because this is really... good

Answer 7

It's very good.  Nicely done!

Answer 8

i think your quite good

Answer 9

It's nice, but it's the same as almost every other love poem out there. Are you fishing for compliments? Cause if people said you were good already, confirming it like this is a bit....

Read my poem?

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Answer 10

i like that poem

but it takes talent to do more than one good one

so if you have any more try put them up id like to read them

could you read my poem

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Answer 11

I think your poem is wonderful.  A "first" poem that says a lot!!!  Filled with passion and disappointment, that comes through beautifully.

Trim the "excess words" from it, add a little punctuation and voile' . . .

My feelings were so real;

now my heart is in pieces

and I'm not sure it will ever heal.

You were once my entire life,

wanted to become your wife;

believed your every lie

till you told me goodbye.

I fell for you so fast;

really thought it would last.

I guess I loved you so much

I just couldn't see

that you and I

just weren't meant to be.

What will you title it?  I suggest "First Love".

Real nice job of expression.