FATE/FIX my Exodia deck?

Question

monsters: 18

Left Arm of the Forbidden One

Left Leg of the Forbidden One

Right Arm of the Forbidden One

Right Leg of the Forbidden One

Exodia the Forbidden One

Emissary of the Afterlife

Emissary of the Afterlife

Emissary of the Afterlife

Jinzo

Marshmallon

Morphing Jar

Mystic Tomato

Mystic Tomato

Mystic Tomato

Sangan

Snipe Hunter

Spirit Reaper

Treeborn Frog

spells: 13

Dark Factory of Mass Production

Dark Factory of Mass Production

Dark Factory of Mass Production

Foolish Burial

Foolish Burial

Level Limit - Area B

Monster Reborn

Monster Reincarnation

Monster Reincarnation

Monster Reincarnation

Nightmare's Steel Cage

Nightmare's Steel Cage

Swords of Revealing Light

traps: 9

Draining Shield

Draining Shield

Draining Shield

Gravity Bind

Magic Cylinder

Mirror Force

Threatening Roar

Threatening Roar

Threatening Roar

total: 40

Its tournment legal, and I am 5 wins out 7 duels with this deck.

Answer 1

wow very good structure. have you won from exodia? I rate it a 9, only because you dont have marshmallon glasses, if you had those it would be a gbetter deck, and you would have a lot of time to get youre exodia pieces

Answer 2

9 out of ten just add 3  copies of giant rat it has a really good effect to summon 3 pieces of your exodia

Answer 3

your deck is cool 8.5 out of 10 just add Marshmallon Glasses

Answer 4

Nice, Nice 9.5/10.

You may want to add Disk Commander, so you can draw two cards. And maybe sangan.