Feedback For My Poem. I Am Thirteen.?

Question

First off, I "feel" the emotion in my poem, but I do not express it how the poem is worded. (I do not cut.) But this poem still is meaningful to me. Please give me constructive feedback.

A cut for the time you kissed me,

A cut for the time I cried.

A cut for the time I loved you,

And two for the time you lied.

Four more for the times I've suffered,

Thanks to your careless mind.

I should not have turned to this,

Because of a silly boy.

Yet even though I shouldn't,

Your love is impossible to avoid...

Answer 1

i think it's great!!

Answer 2

Super cliche.